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活動议程 （一）讲座主题：找尋英語寫作進階之門的鑰匙
一、展示了《江蘇省考試說明》書面表達的四個示例。
二、實例展示和詳解
實例1：2019年蘇錫常一模作文：
實例2：學生初稿Just as the picture shows vividly, a man sits in front of the computer whenever he works, stays at home or plays, not knowing what has happened outside. He even can't get rid of computers in his dream.
語言打磨後指導稿Just as the picture shows vividly, in front of the computer sits a man who is absorbed in it whether at work, at home or in play, overlooking the outside world completely. Eventually, he even can't get rid of the fantasy of using the computer in his dream.
實例3：2019 南京、鹽城一模英語作文：
學生初稿
Sports classes are ignored though they are very important.
語言打磨後指導稿
Despite sports classes’ great importance, they were heavily left ignored in middle schools.
實例4: 1) 話題歸類，詞塊、語塊積累 2）家庭教育類
話題詞塊的積累：
1. weaken children's creativity and imagination
2. pose a threat to the cultivation of communicative ability
3. confine ...to...
4. deprive... of...
5. set their minds free
deprive them of the freedom to set their minds free
6. be subjected to
7. obedient and mediocre
一、話題歸類，詞塊、語塊積累
1) 社交詞塊：socialize, contact, emotional ties/ bonds, gap, alienate A from B, isolate, fit in, be left out otherwise
二、學生習作的打磨
素顔版：
A girl in Chinese costume stands in the sunshine. She smiles.
裸裝版：
There is an American girl standing in the sunshine and giving us a sweet smile.
淡妝版：
In the sunshine stands a girl in Chinese costume, wearing necklace and ribbon, with a smile on her face.
微整版：
In the sunshine graciously stands a pretty girl in traditional Chinese costume, wearing necklace and the like, with a smile on her face.
三、逆向思維之訓練
四、總結
句意內容明确化
複雜句意簡單化
簡單句意英語化
簡單英語複雜化
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